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Premature
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:55:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Tell me, please, you god
Is cruelty your laugh, a jest
Or just a slip of divine hand
Do tell so that I may rest
Beauty placed on this soil, e'er so brief
Sweetly breathing yet suffering the 'infernal' clock
She was but a kiss stolen from the lips of time
Fairer than any forest frond, a grace diamonds can only mock
A moment of innocence in a dire existence
This sparkling star glimpsed but never caught
Held with challenged arms and torpid heart
She was but a whisper that silent darkness sought
So tell me god from where you sit
Why pain and sadness is so blithely tossed
For this empty soul to reach and hope
Yet be denied, with life and love as the cost
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reprobate
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2004-04-27 21:55:41]
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Re: Premature
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:31:50 PM AEST
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| ohhhh! im so sorry for your loss, this is a beautiful but heart wrenching poem, im in tears, ...bless you and thank you for posting, again, my sympathies and heart goes out to you, big hugs and love to you and yours at this sad time, nessa |
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Re: Premature
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:01:04 PM AEST
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Oh dear, how exquisitely lovely you wrote this piece. The loss of a child is the greatest hurt there is. The maternal/paternal bond is strong and to have it taken away is unbearable. My heart is with you.
Rita |
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Re: Premature
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:10:21 AM AEST
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This was written beautifully, I'm sorry for your loss.
- Stacy |
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Re: Premature
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:56:13 PM AEST
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| i made a bargain and he renegged.........you write so eloquently.......... |
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