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Satan is evil??????
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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SaTaN:P
the darkness crawls on
like my body along hells road
the silence of angelic is overcome by the screams
the god of all rises above
the king of the shadows
worship him
bend down and pray to the one
the pain is like an drug
im addicted
the blood flows like a river
and he walks above all the souls
they obey...they wait
the songs of this time are rising
and will over power all
join now and worship the darkness and shadows
lurk from the light
it stings and poisons
the venom of the lord runs through my veins
it feels so good
there turning me black
like the sun
and the sky
the world will come to an end
and i will be waiting with him
forever lurking....
in the shadows
and the darkness
the black sea flows...
im swept away.......~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Re: Satan is evil??????
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by kailadragon on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:50:05 PM AEST
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| creepy and very graphic. I saw the black sea and the vemon very well. good write |
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Re: Satan is evil??????
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:24:49 PM AEST
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Defintiely creepy... reminds me of something ,y nephew would write... It's very true SATAN IS EVI... and he'll so anything he can to pull into his world of darkness... it's like... something wicked this way comes...
Good write...
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Re: Satan is evil??????
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:47:28 PM AEST
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Is satan evil hmm well when you think about it and if you read it all properly, the devil derrived his power from god, so.. its not satan, its god that is evil, but, even though i dont think hes real i would say that hes not evil, but he placed a balance on his power, if you see my thinking :)
This write was well written, i love the vivid imagery i too could see the black see and the metaphor of the vemon running through your veins was exquisit, i like to try and give constructive critisms about something i found in my eyes could be better, but with this piece i found none, the structure was brilliant, the style capitivating technically sound all over :) the vocabulary was perfect also and overall sound and creepy write
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Re: Satan is evil??????
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:49:08 PM AEST
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lol excuse my typo there black seA
Had to read this one again, enwrapped me once and did it again i second all my own comments lol stunning write
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