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The Mattoid
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
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Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 08:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The mattoid teetering ,faltering on the quakingly unsteady edge
Bored with his insipidly modest ideals
An outrageous mockery of his purported fellowship
Feasible change! We take our similarly bohemian-like head gear Our reasonable ,
stately sedate hats off to feasible change!
The mattoid, teetering the fraying searing rope bearing the brunt of the fire
like in an intense prolonged action sequence
The mattoid teethering the wry line over to nihilism.
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2002-10-01 20:15:00]
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Re: The Mattoid
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by matlock on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 11:34:32 PM AEST
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You have dripping prose, and I love it.
The bohemian metaphor was nice. |
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Re: The Mattoid
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by aernby on
Wednesday, 2nd October 2002 @ 06:47:33 AM AEST
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| Good write -- it hangs together well |
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Re: The Mattoid
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 07:13:10 PM AEST
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This one was darker to me. You have many sides to your writing.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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