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If You Stayed A little Longer
Contributed by
sugar0986
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I would walk from star to star to be with you,
Just To tell you those three little words I Love You.
I would die,
Just to be with you one last time.
If I was granted one wish,
I would bring you back.
So I could hold you close,
And never let go.
Im lost without you,
Why couldnt you stay a little while longer.
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sugar0986
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2004-04-28 14:44:34]
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Re: If You Stayed A little Longer
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:48:07 PM AEST
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Hey sugar, I have seen you in a while, how are you? =)
This is an awesome write.... some of the pictures you paint are just amazing.... "walk from star to star"....
Well done!
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Love,
Ellen |
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Re: If You Stayed A little Longer
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:10:18 PM AEST
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| This is a nice sentimental Poem that feels very dear. Nice work |
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Re: If You Stayed A little Longer
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:57:15 AM AEST
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| sad and beautiful..a good write. venkat |
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Re: If You Stayed A little Longer
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by Trisha on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:43:56 PM AEST
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| Hey Brittany. This Is Good. Keep Up The Good Work |
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