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Alone in the World
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She sits in her own corner
all by herself
She feels like someone
stuck her back on the shelf.
When she cries no one hears
its like a tear turned to ice.
She prays that someone
would be nice
And say hi or even smile when
they walk by.
Only they dont even sigh.
So everyday in school
she sits in her little space
Wishing someone would
see the lonliness upon her face.
She just wants a friend by her side
she can do anything only she doesnt
realize she already can.
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MysticFireFairy
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2004-04-28 15:23:40]
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Re: Alone in the World
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:35:49 PM AEST
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great work
keep going... |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:36:00 PM AEST
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aww, this is sad. I sorry that you feel like this. This was a really good write though.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:44:44 PM AEST
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| Beautifully expressed. God bless you. |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by saveMEfromMYSELF on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:04:48 PM AEST
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| You know what!?! If i went to your school I would come up to you and be your friend! |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by PottyPoet on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:07:10 PM AEST
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Good write.
* Li * |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by PottyPoet on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:07:21 PM AEST
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Good write.
* Li * |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:30:20 PM AEST
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Your poem what well expressed. At school look for someone that looks lonely too and approche this person, what do you have to lose. You never know cause you are not alone.
Well done |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:19:11 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one
Well written and a great rhyme
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: Alone in the World
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:06:44 PM AEST
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| If I were at your school I would talk to you everyday and invite you to hang with me and my friends. No one should have to be lonely. Your poems are very good and you have talent, dont let it go! |
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