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Burns
Contributed by
JustScream715
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:30:13 PM in AEST
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Take lighted match to my head
Let the wildfire spread
It will melt my scalp and mane
Then let it burn into my brain
So all the thoughts can leave my mind
And i can leave this horrible night behind
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JustScream715
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2004-04-28 16:30:13]
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Re: Burns
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:18:04 PM AEST
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| Good job! This is really good! |
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Re: Burns
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:18:10 PM AEST
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| Interesting but you'd burn alot more than just the thoughts away.... good writing, scary thought. |
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