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The Beast of Continental Carriage
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:33:41 PM in AEST
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One horrid beast called the Allucid JUDY
The troll of a thing she is
Squats, perches in the corner of her box
The squaking and calling never will I miss.
"You back to your bridge you stinkin TROLL"
Then theres Lee, "The Big Pain in the Butt"
Walking around complaining and smoking
My temper quietly rises
As I suck in smoke and start choking.
And dont let me forget about BOB, the worst of them all
Claws like talons, a scrawny weak kind fo build
Dont touch his pizza or he'll pounce
Use the chair and some armor for a flimsy shield.
Each and every weekend- Friday through Monday
I come to this torture and get bored out of my mind
And deal with the beast of the Continental Carriage
They are all one of a kind.
"What I do for money"
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Re: The Beast of Continental Carriage
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:40:31 PM AEST
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| Good vent, well written. |
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Re: The Beast of Continental Carriage
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:59:27 PM AEST
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wow really good writting
what a wonderful way in spreading your thoughts..
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Re: The Beast of Continental Carriage
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:07:01 PM AEST
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| Nicely Vented. Sorry people are strange. |
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Re: The Beast of Continental Carriage
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:29:12 PM AEST
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Ah yes, nothing like a good, work-related rant presented in poem form! I especially like the way you have a little something to say about each person lol--
*sighs* what some of us have to do to make a living ;-) Great writing Lindsey, I loved it.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: The Beast of Continental Carriage
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:41:45 PM AEST
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Very Nice Write Love It !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Written So Well .......Keep Em Coming
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: The Beast of Continental Carriage
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:38:14 PM AEST
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| Very fun read!...I imagine the reality is as fun as the poem. |
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Re: The Beast of Continental Carriage
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 03:01:19 AM AEST
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| awww huggies, but this was so cute lol, hugs n' love nessa |
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