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The dolphin
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The dolphin swims free
Swim free little one
Oh NO! NETS
Swim faster, faster,
The nets are closer
Swim faster!
The nets catch you
They separate you from your family
You cry for your mommy, she whimpers her last I love you
Fight for your freedom!
All is going black
Your all tied up you cant fight it anymore
You feel
Like you are dying
Finally you wake up,
You are in a strange place
With strange creatures that walk on two legs
Pounding on the force field around you
The noise is unbearable
They throw fish into your tank
You dont want to be fed you want to catch your food
Ohh poor dolphin, keep your mind on freedom
I promise you
You will get your freedom!
February 07th 2000
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lil_angel
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2004-04-28 18:10:00]
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Re: The dolphin
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:23:28 PM AEST
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This is very good, creative.
Nice job. |
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Re: The dolphin
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:29:17 PM AEST
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very enjoying reading
well done... |
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Re: The dolphin
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:39:40 PM AEST
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such a unique poem
great job |
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Re: The dolphin
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:22:07 PM AEST
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Good poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: The dolphin
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:41:02 PM AEST
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Very Creative Write.... I Enjoyed It !!!!!!
Thanks For Sharing :-) Keep Em Coming
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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