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Scared in the Darkness
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:21:17 PM in AEST
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It's like my eyes are blurred,
My soul's trying to be heard,
When did I loose touch?
Have I been alone too much?
I know that I withdrew
From the world which I knew,
But those were scary days,
And it was the only way.
To save myself from despair,
To rid myself of your "care".
Now it's dark, and I'm scared,
I don't know how I've fared.
I can't get through this daze,
Mind's lost in a fog of haze,
You all think I'm strong,
But I can't carry on.
I am trying to awaken,
But my will has been taken,
Superceded by humanity,
Is this my new reality??
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Re: Scared in the Darkness
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:25:42 PM AEST
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| well done really touching.. |
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Re: Scared in the Darkness
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:37:41 PM AEST
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Good Poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Scared in the Darkness
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:04:09 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings dear sweet jaime, im so happy we spoke on the phone tonight for this poem made me worry, im always here to open that dark box when you find yourself in there, your not alone babe, huggies n' big love, ness*mom xxx...
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Re: Scared in the Darkness
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:38:10 PM AEST
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Aww sweetie I know life is scary, especially when you make a big change and then realize it's not everything you thought or hoped it would be. The truth is, no matter what you do or where you go, life can always come after you, and it will always get you. It is unfortunate, but as long as you have some sort of antidote (no matter how temporary) - preferably a constructive, healthy one- then everything will always be ok.
Loving you lots and hoping you call soon,
~ Dee |
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Re: Scared in the Darkness
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:50:59 PM AEST
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You did a wonderful job on writting this one.
I like what you've said but you lost me on the last two lines.(only I thinks as me).
You did a great job |
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