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love is a friendship set on fire
Contributed by
TheRaven
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:30:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The heart is scared
To confess, afraid of revealing
A cut that only needs
Healing. Side by side,
But so far apart, longing
To talk, to share its overwhelming
Feelings. The heart is scared
To touch, frightened of the
Simplistic beauty that can
Pierce so deeply,
Tattooing the darkened soul
With a red charm.
Intoxicating, lustful,
It weaves a trail of light
Through the shadowed tunnels,
Finally reaching that which
Needs to be held most-
Me.
Copyright ©
TheRaven
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2004-04-28 18:30:07]
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Re: love is a friendship set on fire
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:33:10 PM AEST
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simple and touching
great work |
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Re: love is a friendship set on fire
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:02:45 PM AEST
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flowing and sooooo beautiful touches the heart..
I love giving hugs so Im sending you a huge one
Michelle |
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Re: love is a friendship set on fire
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by SuperAsh16 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:14:51 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. it made me tear up. very touching. i can relate. |
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Re: love is a friendship set on fire
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:03:14 PM AEST
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So sad.
Everyone needs to be held and I'm sending positive wishes your way that you might find what you need.
Hang in there okay?
A very touching poem.
Kie |
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Re: love is a friendship set on fire
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by arden on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:49:13 AM AEST
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a very sad write.
filled with emotion.
sorry im not a hugger so heres a pat on the back lol jk
love the poem. keep up the awesome work i look forward to more.
Arden |
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Re: love is a friendship set on fire
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 03:10:57 PM AEST
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SO BEAUTIFUL- "TATTOOING THE DARKENED SOUL WITH RED CHARM"
BEAUTIFUL |
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