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Him & Her
Contributed by
2ndChance
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:40:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Him & Her
Her.
With her yellow raincoat
and black umbrella.
Her.
Her and her little dog.
Walking down the street.
Him.
Him with his blue jeep
and loud music.
Him.
Him and his best-friends.
Driving drunk.
She was walking her dog.
She screams.
He was driving drunk.
He yells.
They Crash.
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Re: Him & Her
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:05:35 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem,when I read it once,it really touched me considering I have lost some friends to drunk driving and then when I reread it again,I loved your comparasions,like how he's with his friends,her with her dog,one walking,the other driving,etc.Every verse was a perfect-fitting comparasion.Very well done,
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Re: Him & Her
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:15:29 PM AEST
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Good poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Him & Her
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:11:50 PM AEST
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Nicely Written I Liked It !!!!!!! It Was An Enjoyable Read !!!!!!!!! Written so Well ....
Keep Em Coming :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: Him & Her
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by kori31 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:34:14 PM AEST
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| you are definitely a new favorite of mine............great write........i look forward to more |
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