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twice bit thrice shy
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:06:35 PM in AEST
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oh, lonely is the bed you've made; as lonely as the rich man's grave
where self importance fades away
your image fades in mountain mists
there is no miracle more cruel than this-
returning sent me spiraling down deeply; an abyss
love spent upon frustration; my soul is tired beyond recognition
love once real enough to move earth and skies-
and oceans crossed; your love has worn me out with its lies
oxodized my soul; hugs nor love nor photographs returned;
you went on with life whilst i sat here and burned
now why appear as if to haunt me; taunt me
to put me in my place? me thinks; not.
or mayhap to gather the strewn about endings that
you created; i will not help you collect these bits
you and i, are now an explosion of words unspoken;
you didn't leap bounding out of my imagination
the love shared twas a firey passion
now; new born mouse that will never squeak
heart twice taken by same storm; now dying alone tattered and torn
torrential rains upon this soul; with heart and mind no longer whole
same love twice tasted, each time jaded; nevermind, all love has faded
once warmed by hopeful embraces; defiant winds blow cold assumptions
how long can my poetry be a healing salve
for this wounded heart filled with sorrow
it is a horrible thing to be so open; hurled-
it is as if my heart walks out in the world
no longer wondering why; heart twice bitten; now thrice shy
too little too late; blows our winds of fate.
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:17:55 PM AEST
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Awww sweetie,you of all people deserve love from a beautiful soul who in return will give you as much as you deserve...I must say though that every verse,and I mean every verse in here was extremely well written,I am blown away by your talent...But hope all will go better,remember after the storm(whatever the storm may be in our lives)the sun rises.
Much love and hugs-a-plenty,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:20:32 PM AEST
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Deep heartfelt emotion elegantly penned. Nessa, I am sorry you are hurting so. I know it doesn't help a lot but there are so many of us that love you and please draw from our strength to help you get through. I am always here for you.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:47:42 PM AEST
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[[[[[[ Nessa ]]]]]] This Is Such A Heartfelt Write
I'm So Sorry Your Hurting Like This !!!!!!!!
I'm Here For You If You Need Me For Anything Hun..... Love Ya Nessa
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:49:20 PM AEST
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Love comes in so many forms- Never forget the love of your children. You're a beautiful woman inside and out and one day, some man will come and make you sooo happy that i'll just have to cry for you.
Love you mom *grins*
- Becca |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:45:39 AM AEST
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Oooh...very sorry my dear Nessa..
"how long can my poetry be a healing salve
for this wounded heart filled with sorrow
it is a horrible thing to be so open; hurled-
it is as if my heart walks out in the world"..
these lines actually filled my eyes..
so sad and heavy...love and hugs..venkat
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by shelby on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:08:08 AM AEST
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Nessa, I wipe a tear from my eyes this isnt right for you to be so hurt....... this was beautifully written but so very sad your broken heart reaching out through each word......... time out
Michelle goes stomping down the hall for the club
(not a stick mind you) ok Im ready now this dude better stop messin with my Nessa!!!
Love you sweety HUGGERS
Michelle |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:14:49 AM AEST
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This is such a breathing, pulsing and dancing. poem... I hope your love will see you in this one and maybe he'll come to reason then...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:15:01 AM AEST
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wow ness.. this completely took my breath away.. you have such a beautiful talent.. wow.. this is so sad but so well written.. keep fighting..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by reilt on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:21:34 AM AEST
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| so so sad but so wonderfully written. i hope your aching heart heals....you deserve to be loved the way you would love...and i imagine that to be wholeheartedly and unconditionally and to the very depths of your heart and soul...so i hope this love thats in you will be returned to you hundredfold because you are a wonderful person with an amazing talent and you deserve all the happiness there is to be had in this life. with love and hope and hugs...dee* |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by arden on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:23:11 PM AEST
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wow,
this is sooo sad... :(
filled with deep dark emotion and saddness.
:(
Arden |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Merry on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:28:48 PM AEST
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an incredible write - you have bared your soul - how could he be such a dolt -
hugs
merry |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by OMEGA_ on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:44:12 PM AEST
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wow that was really awesome
you always impress me with your great works
well done |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:42:23 AM AEST
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I only have one word...WOW...and then this...
*Standing ovation*
Nessa, this is... I have no words for how this touched me... Beautiful though, very beautiful.
Lindsey |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Thivanka on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:48:21 AM AEST
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Wow! This is wonderful! Great!
-Thivanka |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:33:56 AM AEST
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U go girl and I'll pat my foot.
U r a winner and this is a very powerfull write.
who ever? should be on their knees thanking God to have your presence in their lives.Hang tuff friend and if u get barking mad god help the ****** that gets in your way.
Keep up writing the masterpeices!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:27:29 AM AEST
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| What words do I have to tell of such beauty though in sadness most profound. Amazing I must say for a write so nonchalant it tapers souls and wrenches hearts. I am amazed upon my sight. If this is a poetic discourse then you do indeed my dear poet a wonderfully skilled participant in this poetic flows. If this is your life's story then to thee I wish these words as a balm as to each tear you have shed for that unfortunate time. Love is a crazy story told and retold always unsound only sometimes may we find that gentle niche for us to belong. Before that doomed to wander are our souls. Rest easy sweet sorrows for your gentle heart here evident shall in the future I hope will find a nice ledge for you to rest upon, perhaps a gentle man to soothe your tumultuous climes.Once again a nice write herein. |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:26:16 AM AEST
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| Awwww Nessa, who can hurt such a kind heart like yours? This is such a sad write. I feel your emotions being poured out in this write. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:06:04 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching. I can relate. Wish I could say I was as smart as you. How long before the well runs dry? This is so packed with emotion and longing and regret and pain and acceptance.
Stitch |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:15:52 PM AEST
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ok before anyone... wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow ow wow woowow ow ow ow ow wo wo wo wo wow owow owow w.. wow
Nessa this was amazing written, it is such a shame that the saying has to be true within this write 'why does so much talent come from so much pain'
You, of all the people i know, and i know a fair few people in my short existance so far, you deserve love more than any of them, you are the sweetest, loveliest person i have ever had the honour of knowing it burns my heart inside to find that you can be hurt so much, as it always will be nessa my ear is always here for you to use, and i know they make you smile so *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* X's infinity
Luv, hugs, sndy beaches and squishy bugs
Luke xx
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by twesten on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:45:01 PM AEST
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That my dear was astonishing yet very sad. I am so empressed by your words.
You have a gift that surpasses any poem I could ever write.Please don't ever stop
writing. And if this really happened to you, Then please lose that burden of destraction. Your Friend: T.West |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:39:05 AM AEST
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| Sometimes our best works come from our worst experiences. I'm sorry for your pain, hopefully time has helped. |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by Twisterchaser on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 09:57:27 PM AEST
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| This is sad but wonderful told. I can never get the words to flow that would tell of the road of life and it forks. I always take the wrong turn. Thank you |
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Re: twice bit thrice shy
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 09:22:36 PM AEST
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Wow!! Do I ever feel this! Such a cluster of emotions leaping off the page. I'll never understand why for some it is enough to stir up feelings in another, only to take a step back when they do. Ah, well, our lives are richer for the experience. ;)
P.s you have a mighty fine stinger on you, Miss Nessa!
~Scorp |
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