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LIGHTS OUT
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:10:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lights out and the spotlight's on me and I am the only one who sees- these visions in my mind.... Ripping me apart I am left alone with myself. and suddenly it is dark.
And then this spark that sets me off spinning bad flashes through my head Times like this I wish I weren't dead..... But I am in ways parts of me gone DECEASED decreased sense of trust and I must seek all the answers these questions like a cancer and there seems to be no cure.
Infected with rage that was rubbed upon me by those GIANT HANDS Is there something I can do to make it go away? Flush myself of DEATH....... all parts of me revived... How does it feel to really be alive?
LIGHTS OUT alone in the dark confronting the demons the memories............... the start.... and it is still dark!
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PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-04-28 22:10:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LIGHTS OUT
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:49:26 PM AEST (User
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Really like the way this poem felt! Very well done! |
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Re: LIGHTS OUT
(User Rating: 1 ) by priss on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:55:27 AM AEST (User
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such an open, honest poem. sometimes i too wonder what it feels like to be REALLY alive. great poem. |
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