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Midnight's Frozen Kingdom

Contributed by amalyna on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:00:38 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Dream
A piece of fallen snow
A perfect star
Thousands
Swirling in the gentle breeze
Soft white blanket reflects an eerie glow
Mirrors the pink sky
Stillness
Complete
Settled
So not to disturb the sheer, smooth white
Night sleeps on the verge of dawn.

Morning breaks the crisp, colorless world
Into a slushy grey.
Miniscule ice castles
Glistening with pristine perfection,
Demolished by dark, burning rubber.
Children's cries,
No path unmarked,
Footsteps rip through the perfectly woven blanket.
A frozen kingdom lies sleeping
The remnents of a different world
Trapped forever in the distant night...

Copyright © amalyna ... [ 2004-04-29 01:00:38]
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Re: Midnight's Frozen Kingdom (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:51:23 AM AEST
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wow this is incredible.. i love the last line..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Midnight's Frozen Kingdom (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:04:49 PM AEST
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interesting, great images:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Midnight's Frozen Kingdom (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:26:53 PM AEST
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Very beautifull scenery and great writing.
luv, huggs,
emy

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