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Midnight Magick
Contributed by
crystalnebulina
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:28:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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dancing in silver spiderwebs
crescent moonlight casts shimmering light
upon castle walls
falling teardrops make no sound at all
drowning in a liquid abyss
lost in a familiar melody
chasing spiraling rainbow galaxies
imagination is now awakened soaring
faeries full of sorrow
gossamer wings have been torn
sing of dark enchantments
so wishes could follow
golden red leaves gently fall from birch trees
they dance a ballet
leaves blanket a knight and his fair maiden
in a loving embrace
while Lady Nightingale serenades them
with her song
under cascading waterfalls
where nightshades bloom
raven black unicorns with crystal horns
chase glowing fireflies beneath the
midnight sky
moon dragons soar from towering mountain tops
fleeing from wicked sorcerers trying to captuer their magical spells
magical spells
moon dragons would never sell
snowy white owl is the guardian of night
he watches the Faery Witch use her black opals
he warns all to keep away with this screeching call
purple mushrooms greet me with an inviting smile
floating now in crystal blue streams
floating on and on for endless miles
oh i do believe these midnight visions
will visit me once more
so slowly shadowy lemondrops of sunlight
ascends across the horizon
and the goldfinch cries
"awake awake"
i fell out of a dream.
Copyright ©
crystalnebulina
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2004-04-29 01:28:08]
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Re: Midnight Magick
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by shelby on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:33:19 AM AEST
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peaceful and dreamy love it...........
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Re: Midnight Magick
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:09:23 AM AEST
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"raven black unicorns with crystal horns"
This kind of imagery is what I like to see. Although not in my preferred structure or type, I believe this poem is still good nontheless.
Excellently vivid.
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Re: Midnight Magick
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:27:17 AM AEST
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Wow this is a fantastic write.
written like a pro.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Midnight Magick
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by bernard on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:41:57 AM AEST
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I wish I could fall out of a dream like your poem describes good writing. Very entertaining.
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Re: Midnight Magick
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:44:31 AM AEST
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wow this is so beautiful.. i love the dark imagery..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Midnight Magick
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:31:41 AM AEST
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I love your use of fantasy :) another excellent poem very descriptive phrasing and very imaginative!!
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