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Once There was a girl
Contributed by
NirvanaLotus
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:38:50 AM in AEST
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Once there was a girl who was tortured and raped
Once there was a girl who was broken and betrayed
But then she was gone
Once there was a girl who wasn't confused
Once there was a girl...
But then she was used.
Once there was a girl who had no money
Once there was a girl who had nothing to loose
But then she lost it all
Once there was a girl hopeless and lost
Once there was a girl homeless living in a box
But then she saw
Once I believed that I was not her
Once I believed I was someone else
But then I saw
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Re: Once There was a girl
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:20:17 AM AEST
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| Very moving, very emotional. Great write! |
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Re: Once There was a girl
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:42:34 AM AEST
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Deep and self-confronting poem.
Good work. Keep it up.
Strength to you!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Once There was a girl
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:41:20 AM AEST
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The beauty in realizing can be so ugly. I'm sorry for these things. But as it is said the truth wil set you free.
You did a good job at showing us you, And for this you are beautiful. God bless you. I pray a light shines to grow from the cold. I pray for you and wish your safe desent. |
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Re: Once There was a girl
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by sugar0986 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:48:04 PM AEST
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Good Poem. Great write.
~Brittany~ |
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