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To November
Contributed by
reilt
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:41:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And so it's done and settled,
Closure.
All the loose endings tied up.
What was once us
Becomes You and I again,
Separate.
You with your love,
Me with mine,
We are tangled up,
Significant others
Never knowing how
We were once that to each other.
Moved on
And free of the ties
That bound us
To November.
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2004-04-29 10:41:45]
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Re: To November
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by arden on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:07:26 AM AEST
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oh this was lovely!
i just loved this.
so well written.
keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: To November
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:31:16 AM AEST
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| Beautifully strong. This is a great closure poem. |
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Re: To November
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:16:32 PM AEST
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this is quite sad, but very god nonetheless.. the last two lines were perfect to end on.. excellent stuff..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: To November
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:09:06 PM AEST
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so fragile, so sad.
great job.
thanks for sharing |
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