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Depression Takes Over
Contributed by
tiny_mo
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I feel like a piece of trash,
Something that has been passed around.
I want to jump off a building
and crash into the ground.
My heart is so broken,
I don't know what to do.
Please don't forget
I will always love you.
I can't go on
Living this life.
I have no choice
But to pick up the knife.
I know this will cause
Some people pain.
But I feel so empty
I could go insane.
I loved you so much
and that's no lie.
But I give up
and I want to die.
I wish you were here,
To hold me near.
I pick up the gun,
and I fall to the floor.
I guess this is where
Everything has to end.
You were a great guy,
and a wonderful friend.
Copyright ©
tiny_mo
... [
2004-04-29 14:48:04]
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Re: Depression Takes Over
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by sugar0986 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:51:05 PM AEST
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Good poem. I'm sorry that you feel like this.
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Re: Depression Takes Over
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by Hyper on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:05:27 PM AEST
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sorry for your pain, i hope you're doing well now. nice work...
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Re: Depression Takes Over
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:53:24 PM AEST
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NIcely written...but no man is worth taking your life for...... (sorry if this seems harsh)
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