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Social Gluttony
Contributed by
bj
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:47:51 PM in AEST
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There's a desperate siege on the empty mind..
society's child has gone astray..
He's lost the meaning of how to care!
He hunts with rope
and
He traps with snare..
So full of greed!
Moreso with hate!
His mirror is his god!
And to this god he bows..
And to this god he prays..
Until he gluts!
And gluts again..
and wants to glut some more..
from the fruits of greed
and
from the fruits of hate!
And his mirror wants still more!!
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bj
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2004-04-29 15:47:51]
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Re: Social Gluttony
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:26:30 PM AEST
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| Well, yes in a mood. One usually is in a mood when writing. Apparently, you are in an angry sort of mood, which quite possibly might be the best to be in when writing, though the mood known as "sadness" is quite inspirational as well. Uh..... I don't know where in the hell I was going with all that.... Anyway, good poem. You caption the emotion well. |
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