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To Kiss Wet Skin
Contributed by
valek
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:01:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i jump off onto the rocks from this pier
smoke a bowl and wish you were here
everything i've enjoyed isnt the same without you
starting to hate everything, dont know what to do
i jump out of this burning structure
i hit the ground, i see your picture
i stop breathing, my ears are ringing
my sight is gone, my mouth is stinging
yearning to kiss your beauty again
remembering the wetness of your skin
wanting to once again lick your heart
and taste your flesh while i fall apart
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valek
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2004-04-29 16:01:29]
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Re: To Kiss Wet Skin
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:09:11 PM AEST
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"wanting to once again lick your heart
and taste your flesh while i fall apart"
Where did you come from??
This is the best poem I've read all week!
Damn. |
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Re: To Kiss Wet Skin
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by ravenrain on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:19:09 AM AEST
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| I'm at a lose of words. This is a remarkable poem. "yearning to kiss your beauty again" I love the fact that you didn't put a physical part in it....just beauty. |
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