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Old Sparky
Contributed by
parkman
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:14:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I take a draw of my cigarette, a sip of my beer
Thinking of life, as death is so near
This was my last wish, as it came near my time
To sit in old sparky and I'm feeling fine
I can hear wardens mumbling, outside my cell
Whispering to each other, may he rot in hell
The crime I commited, the most serious one
I took eight young lives and all for fun
A psychiatrist deemed me, fit to stand trial
I knew what I had done, there was no denial
The jury all sickened, by what was revealed
Seeing on their faces, my fate had been sealed
The verdict came back, guilty as hell
Death by electrocution, the families all yell
I laugh in their faces, as I am taken down
Hurling abuse, at the folks of this town
My time has now come, as I'm put in the chair
Being strapped in, hood covering my stare
Lights going dim, as my body does fry
Revenge will be mine, even though I now die
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-04-29 16:14:20]
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Re: Old Sparky
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:33:48 PM AEST
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| ...die? The last word is "die", right? Very good imagery. You did well in capturing the apathy of the convict; setting the mood. Spanktastic. |
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Re: Old Sparky
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:36:06 PM AEST
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omg.. this is absolutely incredible!!!! i love it, i love it.. (despite it's being morbid lol) great stuff!
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Old Sparky
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:12:13 PM AEST
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I would imagine ole sparky has seen alot.
A very interesting poem to read.
Well done.
Kie |
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