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Written in Permanent Ink
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:18:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I stare at the writing on my hand
Written in permanent ink
Dan wants to die?
Is what it says
Written in all capital letters
I run my finger across the words
Trying to think of a way to make you want to live
Dan wants to die?
You whisper to me as I hold you in my arms
I dont give you reasons to live
Or tell you that it is wrong
Dan wants to die?
Written on my hand all in capital letters
In permanent ink
I keep it on for one short day
Then gently rub it off
For no one else needs to know
That
Dan wants to die?
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lil_angel
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2004-04-29 17:18:02]
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Re: Written in Permanent Ink
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:41:08 PM AEST
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this really touched me.... stay strong hun,
and hope and pray that he does choose life.
*hugs*
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Re: Written in Permanent Ink
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by TwEeK on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:45:21 PM AEST
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Dont let him go, dont let him die, he is loved, dont let him go, ever, dont leave him, hje needs you, your helping gideing hand, he needs your love.
tweeky,
good poem, it touched me |
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Re: Written in Permanent Ink
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by bj on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:49:00 PM AEST
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| now write on his hand that you want him to live..well done... |
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Re: Written in Permanent Ink
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by Juliet on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 02:20:43 PM AEST
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| How very sad! I'm sure others would want to know,even if they didn't need to. Very real and very good. |
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