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You're Gone, I'm Glad
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:17:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Waking up in dark, early shadows
Seeping in through blind-drawn window
The feelings I once had have gone
Leaving like nighttime in the upcoming dawn
I'm free
Can barely draw air
But I don't really care
My thoughts of you have flown away
Leaving like swiftly rotting decay
Still leaving your stench
Perhaps I'll miss you one day
Though for now I'll simply lay
And drown in my happiness
Not wanting your caress
And loving it
Copyright ©
Saitou-sama
... [
2004-04-29 18:17:27]
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Re: You're Gone, I'm Glad
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by sheri on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:25:17 PM AEST
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| NIce job describing how happy you are over not wanting this girl. Good use of imagery. |
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