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Metaphor
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:24:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My world has burned down around me
The cinders still fall like snow
I can't grow anything from these ashes
Why did it have to be you to strike the match?
The knife in my back hurts
I can't reach far enought to pull it out
Won't you help me?
Why did you but it there in the first place?
I pick up the shards of this broken affection
You showed me it wasn't a reflection
Of what I thought it was
But did you really have to lie?
You sail away to better past times
I'm left here alone
A forgotten toy in the sand
Did you get tired of playing with me?
I'm sorry that you hate me
Copyright ©
Saitou-sama
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2004-04-29 18:24:32]
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Re: Metaphor
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by sugar0986 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:42:24 PM AEST
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this is sad. But Great Write!
~Brittany~ |
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