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Sweetness Is My Weakness
Contributed by
sugar0986
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You know that sweetness is my weakness,
And with one touch of your lips on mine makes me go breathless.
You charm me with those endless kisses,
That makes me go in to those sweet dazes.
When you hold me close,
It seems like time has froze.
Nothing can move me from that moment,
That moment of sparkling enchanted pleasure.
Your mine to keep forever,
Never to let you go.
Youre in my heart to stay.
Right where you belong.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2004-04-29 18:37:55]
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Re: Sweetness Is My Weakness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:59:57 PM AEST
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I Love This Poem! The way you used you words, were just i don't what i trying to say. Great Poem...... Well done.
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Re: Sweetness Is My Weakness
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
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A refreshingly good poem... loved it!!!
Ur word usage is great... it's like u weave ur words together into a tapestry of meaning...
Beautiful write...
~Donna~
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