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Your New Girl
Contributed by
kayald
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You know shes not for you,
You know shes not like me
She is not understanding,
Not like I used to be
Shes jealous without reason
And she doesnt give you space
Sure she might be lovelier,
But you know I cant be replaced
Her laugh is so fake
And she doesnt like your friends
But you stand be her side
Even though you wish itd end
I was so much better
At knowing what you want
But now that youve let me go
You have to listen to her taunt.
I dont really understand
What you see in her
I miss all that we had
And the way we were
Im not saying we are meant to be
Or that us? might have worked better
I just think things wouldve been great
Even if we didnt last forever
Well I might just be taken
By the time you two are done
So sorry, you missed your chance
You couldve had a lot more fun.
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-04-29 19:08:16]
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Re: Your New Girl
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:31:18 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem a lot.. it was a really good rhyme.. its amazing how guys are such gerks all the time and dont realize that theyre with the wrong girl.. you shouldnt be waisting your time on this guy he doesnt sound very pleasant...
Good write!:~)
LyL :-*
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Re: Your New Girl
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by Blu on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:00:23 PM AEST
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Good poem.
It's a maddening feeling to see someone you used to be with now on the arm of someone else. Keep your chin up, resolution can take a little time, but it will come.
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Re: Your New Girl
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:43:48 PM AEST
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i liked the poem and understood it very well keep going on, it'll get better.
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Re: Your New Girl
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:10:13 AM AEST
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From Tripod:
I wonder if this has anything to do with Garret????
I did like it though Kay...It was a deeply sentimental poem, It struck me quite fiercely |
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