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Were All Feeling It
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:08:56 PM in AEST
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Understanding my life
Is so difficult for you
Youll never understand
The way I ache
The way Ive been stricken,
Stricken from my heart
Ive gained so much
Yet Ive lost even more
Criticizing me is just hurting me more
You havent realized what youve done
What Ive done
What weve all done to each other
Were so stuck in our pain
Our anger is taking our mind over
Breaking our skin
Breaking our hearts
Molding us into balls of clay
That are so fragile
And break with touch
Uncontrollable urges
That have been thought about
And used to ease the pain
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pyrofungus
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2004-04-29 19:08:56]
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Re: Were All Feeling It
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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| This is good, I can relate too it. Well done |
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Re: Were All Feeling It
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:32:34 PM AEST
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| a great write, i feel this way alot sometimes. there are some great images here. good write phil xxx |
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Re: Were All Feeling It
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:37:45 PM AEST
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Yeah... I totally agree... we've all felt it at some point in our lives and for some they are just experiencing it now... I just got off the phone with one of my friends who had had a tuff night and was thinking of suicide...
So... yeah we're all feeling it!
Thanks so much for ur write... it is really good... I'm sorry I have kinda overlooked your poems... maybe I should start reading them even if I don't think I would want to read it...
from what i've read so far from u... u have the "GIFT" Plz use it wisely... my friend...
keep up the great work...
~Donna~
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