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A look inside the man
Contributed by
Archie
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do you marvel?
Do you wonder?
Do you ponder or consider,
When you look into the eyes of a brother or a sister?
Do their eyes draw to your soul?
Do you see their dreams or goals,
all the pain that's in their lives,
their happy and sad times?
Or do you look then turn away,
cause you do not want to face
what's inside those piercing spheres,
that removes your heart's facade
to reveal what's in your heart
Written 1/3/99
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-04-29 19:54:59]
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Re: A look inside the man
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:23:50 PM AEST
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A thought provoking poem.
Yes I see many things when I look into someones eyes.
I really liked this one...
Kie |
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Re: A look inside the man
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:14:04 AM AEST
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Indeed. I can stare right through people with mine. lol, well, to an extent, anyway.
Good write. |
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Re: A look inside the man
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:48:25 PM AEST
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A good write....Eyes always tell me what the lips fail to say..... and my eyes always give me away....
Jenni |
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Re: A look inside the man
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:47:29 PM AEST
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Windows of the souls they say. Well put. I really like the questioning style of this poem. Keep it up.
Take care.
David |
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Re: A look inside the man
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:58:09 AM AEST
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Awesome poem!! It is something I can really relate to. And it sends out so much emotion!! You have true talent. Keep the faith, and God Bless.
*~Erin~* |
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Re: A look inside the man
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th February 2019 @ 02:56:33 PM AEST
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| This is so great. I do have a feel for others pain and thoughts.This was real magic! |
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Re: A look inside the man
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 26th November 2023 @ 07:27:23 PM AEST
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| I came hear to read it again.... |
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