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Lost
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:58:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Boxed in, pressure all around,
Sitting there, waiting to be found.
Knowing she has to do it on her own,
Fear is what she will not condone.
Fighting for her soul in the deep of night,
Hoping to feel the steel's cold bite.
Looking for an end to this encaptured brutality,
To awaken again to the startling reality.
Chancing the odds, making the gamble,
Searching for herself amid the shambles.
Knowing that if she couldn't save herself,
She'd cut her own heart out before sitting on the shelf.
Shining hope turning to blackest despair,
She cast off her body and left it there.
She learned she had nothing left to gain,
And so, she walked away from the pain.
Why couldn't she win, you say?
She couldn't see the light of another day.
One life spent, but at what cost?
Another soul cries, that one was lost.
~*~Jaime Moran~*~
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Re: Lost
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by Blu on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:03:55 PM AEST
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Chilling-this hits all too close to home. You have a talent with words.
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Re: Lost
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:18:13 PM AEST
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This poem is packed with emotion and thought.
Suicide saddens me and the fall out left for the family does as well.
A great poem I commend you.
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Re: Lost
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:35:35 PM AEST
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oh jaime, this is so sadly beautiful, written so wonderfully with so much love, my heart goes out to all who are suicidal as you well know, its only by luck(?) im still here, big hugs and big love, always, daughter of my heart, nessa*mom xxx...
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Re: Lost
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:44:02 PM AEST
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| Wow this poem is so deep ,that i really can feel the emotions in this poem,in a way it kinda touch home for me ,a few years back i wanted to end my life so bad ,i was thinking of different ways to do it.So i can really relate to this poem,great write, |
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Re: Lost
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by SweetRhythm on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:10:43 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed "lost" a lot thoe its all sadly true, you captured well the reality of many peoples minds & . Gripping & powerful. Fabulously done & well appreciated. |
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Re: Lost
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:21:02 AM AEST
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Packed with emotion & despair, you have captured the minds & feelings of many in this exact state. Very well put together. Moving.
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:19:51 AM AEST
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*Doesn't know what to say for once*
Your sis
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