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Naked (with clothes on)
Contributed by
EvaRee
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:01:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm now naked
with nothing to hide
in your eyes
is where I confide.
I left nothing
to search or guess
I let you in my head
and you gave me a kiss.
A kiss that to me
meant it's okay
to keep these feelings
to never let them go away.
You know now what i think
everytime I look in your eyes
thinking of how much I love you
and will until I die.
I'm now naked
my heart is all yours
nothing else matters
nothing from before.
I'm all yours now
you even have my soul
please just promise
to never let it go.
All of me
i'm completley naked
and i'm giving you my heart
so please just take it...
Copyright ©
EvaRee
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2004-04-29 22:01:24]
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Re: Naked (with clothes on)
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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Very creative write. The title is catchy and more will respond to it.
Very beautifull write and work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Naked (with clothes on)
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:02:12 PM AEST
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| Yea i like this flow,love can be so....beautiful when you give into it. |
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