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Aimless
Contributed by
dormantwhispers
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:41:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears are nothing but dried trails on the ghastly face of time.
Leaving me with nothing but razor blade kisses and death wishes.
Let's retrace the beginning of time
Back to the horizon where nothing can be seen.
My wings are broken and bleeding life.
I'm walking through a desert of broken promises.
The stars are bleeding crimson life as beauty drains.
I'm finally drowning in my life.
Copyright ©
dormantwhispers
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2004-04-29 22:41:03]
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Re: Aimless
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:27:19 PM AEST
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| made sense to me, but that doesnt exactly mean a good thing sometimes, oh well. good job. |
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Re: Aimless
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:53:03 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Makes great sense to me.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Aimless
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by SuperAsh16 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:40:50 PM AEST
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| makes perfect sense to moi. then again, im ****ed up in the head but so are u. arent we all. |
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Re: Aimless
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:58:21 PM AEST
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so empty and yet pointed...makes one wonder what's next, if anything. and if there is, why?
and why bother.
provocative write.
thanks for sharing |
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