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Funeral
Contributed by
thumper
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:51:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Darkness. Silence.
Peace at last!
No more torment
Pain
Agony
Blissful nothingness
Why are you here?(now?)
Where were you then......
When......
Why?
It does no good
To cry
Now
Well
I did not know
You cared
Then
When......
I needed to know.
Now......
I don't care!
Copyright ©
thumper
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2004-04-29 22:51:44]
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Re: Funeral
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:24:46 PM AEST
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this is like the flow of thoughts that the soul feels after death, very clever write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Funeral
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:25:04 AM AEST
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| Yes, I have to agree with Ladyfawn..thoughts of a soul ..a sparkling flow. venkat |
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Re: Funeral
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:49:12 AM AEST
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| Cool I liked, I liked. |
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Re: Funeral
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:21:29 AM AEST
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Of course...looking on from somewhere.....free from here and gone to there....
Very good write, thank you for sharing.
Chris
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