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A Moment Of Pure Crimson Pleasure
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:07:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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An eyeball rolls before my feet,
And on the wall hangs a body that bleeds
A hundred yards to my right,
Stands a woman full of fright
She stands in a corner dressed in black
As blood runs from her hair, and down her back
Her eyes are a crimson red,
And her body is very pale
In her right hand she holds a head,
And in her left a blood filled pail
She has nails that will tear a man apart,
And teeth, that could easily shred to the heart
She lives in a world of darkness,
For she is nothing more than heartless
She starts to foam from the mouth,
As she starts to scream and shout
I begin to back up towards a wall,
As she jumps into me, and makes me fall
I stare into those crimson filled eyes
While she stands above me,
And stares back into mine
She moves in closer towards my face
With a look, that my mind will always trace
She dumps the blood filled pail over my head,
And tells me to company her,
In the life of the dead
I run my tongue across my lips,
And place my hands upon her hips
Then she pulls me closer for a blood filled kiss
And sinks her marbled fangs into my neck
As ecstasy took over next
I feel her blood run through my veins
Running through just like a freight train
Then within no time at all,
My body became filled with rage
It was a moment I would always treasure,
A moment of pure crimson pleasure
2004 Copyright BY: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-29 23:07:09]
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Re: A Moment Of Pure Crimson Pleasure
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:13:05 PM AEST
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Whoa!!! I don't know what to say... Ron...
Except... Whoa!!! LOL... WOW... where did this come from? Sends chill up and down my spine... Keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: A Moment Of Pure Crimson Pleasure
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by shelby on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:30:37 PM AEST
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Im stunned this put me back on my chair!! Now Iv got super thriller chills OMG .............
Love ya Michelle |
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Re: A Moment Of Pure Crimson Pleasure
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:05:16 AM AEST
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Ron This Is A Very Chilling Dark Poem
I'm Amazed With Every One You Write ......
It Sent Cold Chills All Over My Little Body LoL :-)
Please Keep These Dark & Chilling Poems Coming......
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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