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The Fireplace
Contributed by
tootieflutie
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:18:40 PM in AEST
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The fire crackles,
As it burnes in the fireplace,
And fills the house,
With a warm sensation,
As the floor is creaking,
While people are walking,
To sit in the rocking chair,
And watch the fire dancing,
Snap, crackle, pop,
The wood is breaking apart,
While the fire is blazing,
And keeping us warm,
During the cold winter days,
And when the blizzards come,
The fire is warm!
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2004-04-29 23:18:40]
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Re: The Fireplace
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by thumper on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:41:26 PM AEST
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Yeah!! Made me wish for a fireplace. Could almost smell the fire. I enjoyed reading this. Very visual. Nice write. Look forward to reading more of your writes.
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