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Covered In Crimson Red
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:53:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As I come up, and out of my pool of crimson blood
My body is painted to fit like a glove
I walk through these streets covered in red
Looking for my next victim,
Who will end up dead
I see a woman in the alley
And her eyes open wide as she stares at me
I walk up to her, and take my bite
For she could not run, due to the fright
Her body becomes weak, and she starts to fall
But here under the moonlight, she will get it all
Her eyes turn emerald green
And her fangs start to form intensely
Her skin turns to a beautiful pale white
As she starts to live her new life
She jumps fearfully into the air,
And takes her first life, with no care
Blood drips from her luscious red lips,
And her hair blows in the wind,
As she commits the ultimate sin
Through the streets we walk together
Taking every brother and sister,
Taking fathers, and mothers
Until we left no other
Then we went back to my pool of crimson blood,
And made the ultimate crimson love
As we were covered in red,
And making love in the blood of the dead
Being covered in a beautiful
Crimson red
2004 Copyright BY: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-30 02:53:14]
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Re: Covered In Crimson Red
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:59:46 AM AEST
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lovely haunting steaming sensual chilling all wrapped up to form the complete masterpiece I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Covered In Crimson Red
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:40:05 AM AEST
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Great work rylo. Chilling, reallly powerful. Loved it
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Re: Covered In Crimson Red
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by bernard on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 07:43:01 AM AEST
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I got goose pimples reading this. When are you coming my way, I have bundles of fresh garlic hanging all around the place and by the way a silver cross sharpened to a point LOLs great poem.
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Re: Covered In Crimson Red
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:07:27 AM AEST
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nice and dark, chilling feel to it, yet filled with gripping images, awesome poem liked this one.
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Re: Covered In Crimson Red
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by LiquidChaos on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 10:22:39 AM AEST
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| fascinating...keep it up |
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