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Death Would Be Nice...
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:37:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Who cares deeply for me?
Where is the point?
Friends mean nothing to me!
I feel so up uptight!
Wheres the strength in me?
To know I must go on?
Wheres the point inside me?
To tell me self-harm is wrong!
Its all gone from me!
I dont know where I am.
Nothings the same anymore.
Goods, becoming bad.
Feelings have turned bitter,
Emotions, weary, old.
If theres a point just tell me!
Before I go completely cold!!
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deathdrop
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2004-04-30 11:37:56]
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Re: Death Would Be Nice...
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:05:44 PM AEST
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| This is a really, really, good write! Great job! |
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Re: Death Would Be Nice...
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by mickie on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:12:51 PM AEST
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| you said you still feel the same way. i hear you. i understand you. life is very complex, and often feels like a nightmare. i just want to encourage you that there is a point to what you are feeling. i still struggle with such feelings. contact me and let me know how you are doing, okay? stay safe and believe you can succeed! |
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Re: Death Would Be Nice...
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by Thivanka on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:24:18 PM AEST
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First of all, the poem is really good. It's short but, expressed a lot in those few words. Secondly, we all, I think, feel this way in any phase of life. I have been through hell, but if you just manage to keep the lid on, happiness is there. Beilive me.
-Thivanka |
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Re: Death Would Be Nice...
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by Thivanka on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:25:53 PM AEST
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First of all, the poem is really good. It's short but, expressed a lot in those few words. Secondly, we all, I think, feel this way in any phase of life. I have been through hell, but if you just manage to keep the lid on, happiness is there. Beilive me.
-Thivanka |
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Re: Death Would Be Nice...
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by kailadragon on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:46:02 PM AEST
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| God, i know exactly how you feel.... thank you for writing this.....now I know i'm not the only one who feels like this right now....great write |
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