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Tears
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:41:31 PM in AEST
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The tears are almost here
Why wont they come
Closer and closer they appear
But in reality they are so far
My foes mock me
My friends hold me
I just wish they would come
Tears come and set me free
Why wont they come
I have tried but failed
I have bottled up them for so long
I have forgotten how to cry
Please tears come
But not yet
I am drowning
Which way to go
Whirlpool on one side
Sharks on the other
Ahead looks too far
Behind is too painful
January 14th 2000
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Re: Tears
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:51:49 PM AEST
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| How sad. I hope they came and set you free, ourself is the worst prison. |
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Re: Tears
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by Kie on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:05:10 PM AEST
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Sometimes we can get into such a state of shock that our surroundings and emotions don't seem real. Tears are cleansing crystals to soothe pain.
Your poem touched my heart.
Kie |
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Re: Tears
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:33:07 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one
a very sad yet wonderful poem
~*xObeaOx*~
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:34:11 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie, how awful. Still no tears huh? Well, when they come I bet it will be a gully washer. Keep us posted on the tear situation.
Rita |
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Re: Tears
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by ksprincess42004 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:16:13 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate to this one. Great job. |
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Re: Tears
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:58:01 PM AEST
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| Good write lil_angel... I can relate to this. |
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Re: Tears
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:03:13 AM AEST
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Wow...so much sadness. You really have a way for putting such strong emotion into your poetry. I'm sorry you feel like this, and I hope you can find a release.
Excellent writing as usual
Love Dawny x |
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