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Licorice Tongue
Contributed by
NirvanaLotus
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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licorice tongue boy come back with me
in your lips all the world is freed
you taste so sweet like candy itself
Yager bombs, liquor right off the shelf...
i wish you knew how you tasted
that your lips are never wasted
i want you to take me in
bring me closer to sweet sin
my licorice tongue boy...
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2004-04-30 16:05:04]
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Re: Licorice Tongue
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:09:29 PM AEST
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| Kewl poem man...i really liked it...no matter if it was short or not. Yeah i've been there before...haven't we all. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Licorice Tongue
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by Diatribe on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:27:05 PM AEST
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| Short & sweet... I love it and I LOVE Yager bombs... my favorite drink... yummy... thanks a lot, now that I read your poem I really want one. |
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Re: Licorice Tongue
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 06:41:35 PM AEST
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"I want you to take me in
bring me closer to sweet sin
my licorice tongue boy..."
I love it... :) |
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Re: Licorice Tongue
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:34:48 PM AEST
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Hey! is this love poetry or "lust" poetry???? (Hee-hee!)
Seriously, this was a fun read. Nicely done!
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Re: Licorice Tongue
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:41:21 AM AEST
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| this was really great and a joy to read! doesnt matter if a poem is short or not =P...great job in writing this, it was awesome =P |
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Re: Licorice Tongue
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:23:21 PM AEST
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| good |
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