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eXeRCiSe SeLF CoNTRoL
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:04:46 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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Mockery, defaced in a crowd of your peers
Lacking, embarrassment to have to show tears
Depression, As the ending nears
Screaming, Pleading for help in deafened ears.
Torture, contemplate a morbid suicide
Frantically, searching for a place to hide
Confusion, Only when along for lifes miserable carnival ride
Swallowing, hard to conseal your broken pride.
Tainted, Feeling less than up to par
Hellbent, planning a departure to far
Wishful, Moments spent wasted on wishing on a star
This, self control exercise should raise the bar.
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xslashxprettyxskinx
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2004-04-30 17:04:46]
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Re: eXeRCiSe SeLF CoNTRoL
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by Kie on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:28:01 PM AEST
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It sounds like your inner self is tortured.
A complex and interesting poem.
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Re: eXeRCiSe SeLF CoNTRoL
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:59:31 PM AEST
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| deep write, I feel you on this one. A+++ |
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