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the ghost of you
Contributed by
crystalnebulina
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:22:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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oh how can i find the words to say to you... shattered pieces of you are like shiny diamonds lost in the wind... ---------------- i slipped off your pedestal long ago i fell from grace now shame rules my realm and the guilt i have feels like a heavy winter's cloak that won't ever come off it's the color of the blackest shadow that grows across my heart ------------------- yeah i know it's so cold now i know i haven't been there yes my words are careless but know that you're in my thoughts, always believe me when i say i really do care ------------------ all alone surrounded by candlelight shadows over the years those hard edges faded into softness all my attempts to turn back the hands of time have been in vain now i'm only left with the ghost of you you're no longer the same ------------------- oh how i desire to fly through the starless sky my wings would blaze like they're on fire (oh let this dream carry me away) still i can't leave my fears behind when your voice echoes my name how will i be able to embrace...to face the ghost of you you're no longer the same -------------------- place your frail hand into mine let's walk down the path of tears through time of memories of yesterdays that still haunts us --------------------- i know i let you down "i'm sorry" doesn't sound like much to say if i could slay your dragon down i would -------------------- fall into me swallow my youth gather my light wipe away those dark shadows i can't see you come back to me i'll follow the crow to you come back to me ------------------ oh how will i be able to face...to embrace the ghost of you you're no longer the same ------------------- you...i'll remember forever and never forget this... that i'll always love you.
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Re: the ghost of you
(User Rating: 1 ) by BaByBaNaNa on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:40:00 PM AEST (User
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oh my god! this poem reminds me so much of my ex and I. it's like . . . no matter how much i say i'm sorry, it don't make anything better, and i care about him so much. your poem really made me think about stuff i did. thanx :) |
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Re: the ghost of you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pompous on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 04:30:05 AM AEST (User
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thats beautiful poem, sad, and sweet but I love every word you used in here and how you used them
...Neal... |
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