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The Blade
Contributed by
aaron5951
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:09:31 AM in AEST
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The blade swings violently
As the wind blows it to and fro.
The wind blows to and fro
As the blade swings.
In everything, everything has its place.
And in its place, is everything.
Simplicity can hold difficulties
But in difficulties, simple answers can be found.
Problems do not always work themselves out
And some problems cannot be solved.
Life is mysterious
Yet the mystery lives within us.
To understand life
One must first understand himself.
As the wind calms
The blades violent motion subsides
Then the breath disappears,
And the blade stands still.
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2004-05-01 00:09:31]
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Re: The Blade
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:11:56 AM AEST
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good comparisons between blade and life
enjoyable read |
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Re: The Blade
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:43:01 PM AEST
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| nicely done here, i liked it =) |
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Re: The Blade
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:07:19 PM AEST
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| very different poetry. I liked it alot. sandy |
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