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Creation Quest
Contributed by
Loyalist
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:56:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Here I am in perpetual search
this driving pang of want is rising
superflously I try an expell my desire and
dreams are swift and fleeting these thoughts
that rise and fall like my chest,
inhale
exhale
existentialism I cannot bring to fruit, it is slipping
slithering too slimey to grip with
these large hands, like arthritic stumps.
I hear the drums, alas no beat to inspire
so much as cacophony in my matter
translates into blank pages by the ton.
when once my youth hath filled mine eyes
with dillusions of grandeure, they now crash
upon the darkness left undone with feeling
felt so hard and coarse like a crown of thorns.
No, it's not like it was nor will ever be
I realize now more over later it is a good thing.
Being twenty seven almost twenty eight,
I am not at all a loss, wasting time on an art
which shall never bring me fruit.
Copyright ©
Loyalist
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2004-05-01 03:56:53]
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Re: Creation Quest
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by venkat on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 04:27:45 AM AEST
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| Good..thought provoking..It has good poetic imagery..all the best. venkat |
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Re: Creation Quest
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:18:46 PM AEST
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Deep, philosophical, reflective and i'm impressed with your writing style.
A warm welcome to YPDC.
Kie |
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Re: Creation Quest
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:55:51 AM AEST
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Another good write.
for someone your age these writes show much wisdom.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Creation Quest
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 10:20:45 PM AEST
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| interesting, hugs n' love nessa |
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