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The Dog
Contributed by
PottyPoet
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:24:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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As sun dies and moonrise
something creates a soft tap,
Like coin to floor,
the tap tap dog is seeking.
I see two eyes like moonlight skies,
brining a feeling of emptiness,
I watched the leaves rustle,
then fall to a hustle
but the tap tap dog stood firm.
I heard the sound, the tap tap sound
the dog was walking away,
I heard the wind whisper, like paper to pen,
and once again I heard it
the tap tap dogs' black paws.
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2004-05-01 05:24:14]
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Re: The Dog
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by Loyalist on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:31:09 AM AEST
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He is indeed very talented.
Does he have an account here?
I think he should.
At such a young age writing this well, it would be best to get him to keep a record of it.
I certainly would like to read more.
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Re: The Dog
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:52:46 AM AEST
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| Excellent! Encourage him! You are so right in your assertion about his talent. |
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