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Sucide what a big,big lie.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:26:09 AM in AEST
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Many young and old people committed
this life sucking act on them self.
giving up on life without a fight.
i care not to remember their plight,
why? you may ask,because they choose not
to fight nor to seek help or allowed other to help.
embarrass to ask or let others know they need help.
help is never far no matter were you are.
if you have faith to go this far you have the power to rethink your decision.
the plan GOD has for you;your enemy doesn't want to suceed
because your impact on others will interrupt his plan of distroying man.
but if you live you can overcome what ever cause you to think alone
this line.
the power is within you man.speak, wite down your plans,
read them each and every day and watch the master go to
work and bring them to pass if you have faith.
so please if you are thinking about doing this remember you know were you are now,
but not were you are going.a decision to make, the right one my frien
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-05-01 08:26:09]
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Re: Sucide what a big,big lie.
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by Alessa on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:17:13 AM AEST
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| I think you're wrong about this,thoses people don't give up without a fight,they give up when they're tired of fighting.You wrote this well,but from the wrong perspective. |
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Re: Sucide what a big,big lie.
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by Black13 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:57:36 AM AEST
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This is why you should never help anyone who is suicidal.
This poem had good flow but what you said is plain wrong.
You make it so impersonal adding in god. When what a person would want at that time is another person. Someone they can feel. |
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Re: Sucide what a big,big lie.
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:33:27 AM AEST
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| i agree with the other two writes...this was written well! but i dont neccessarily agree with whats said here |
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Re: Sucide what a big,big lie.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:02:22 PM AEST
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| dearest richard, i know you feel every word with your heart, and have a great message here, unfortunatly when one is suicidal the fact is many have come to a dark place in their soul and it is not that easy, ive been there, i know both sides, why i am here i really dont know, anyway, well written poem on a sensitive subject, bless you for caring:) hugs n' love nessa x |
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