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Where I Lay
Contributed by
Rhei76
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:37:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Lying on the floor, it could be just a piece
of ground. All I feel is earth, I don't
know if there is tile underneath, but there
is grass around in all the corners of the
room. This use to be a house, a home, must
of been so many years ago.
Lying on the floor, sun shining, no roof or
doors. No soul that stirs. I lie alone on my
floor, could be just a piece of ground. All
I feel is earth with grass growing all
around.
At night out of my right eye up. I can catch
the stars. Once, how many nights ago? I saw
the moon, but that's over and now it's noon,
and everyday at this time with the sun
beating down it smells the worse.
At times I wish the walls would fall, just
so the stinch can breathe.
Copyright 2004 Blackhaven Ritzuell
Copyright ©
Rhei76
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2004-05-01 11:37:42]
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Re: Where I Lay
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:20:43 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
This is a great poem.
Very impressive.
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Re: Where I Lay
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:42:44 PM AEST
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Very creative.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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