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Woes of a Cold
Contributed by
ksprincess42004
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:49:00 PM in AEST
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I cant breathe
My passages are blocked
By an evil invader--
A virus of some sort
I sit here--
Aches riddling my body with pain
Fever causing hallucinations
I wait for relief
Wonderful medicine flowing through my veins
Slowly, the brick inside my head shrinks
And I can inhale again
At least for the next four hours
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2004-05-01 12:49:00]
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Re: Woes of a Cold
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:40:21 PM AEST
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a cute commercial for a cold tablet. nice write.
thanks for sharing
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Re: Woes of a Cold
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by Dierna on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:19:57 PM AEST
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| *raises an eyebrow* *thinks about it* Dude, I seriously think Suddafed needs to give you a ring! Lol. |
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Re: Woes of a Cold
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:40:47 PM AEST
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Delightful write. I could almost feel the tingle in my nose. :-) I like this one.
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