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Storyteller
Contributed by
ksprincess42004
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Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:54:04 PM in AEST
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When she speaks
Her audience is hushed
Excitement fills the air
As she searches for breath
In her old body
Her eyes have seen many lands
Her lips have kissed many men
Her soul is as wise as any monk's
But her aging body
Has halted her adventures
But she continues to live
Through the stories she spins
She now lives through
The sparkle in the young children's eyes
And their gasps of terror as she tells
A story of rescue
Truth is not a requirement now
Old age is a time of fantasy and fabrication
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ksprincess42004
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2004-05-01 12:54:04]
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Re: Storyteller
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by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:32:13 PM AEST
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You also have the gift of telling a story. You did a remarkable job on this poem and made it flow as smoothly as silk.
I loved it, I truly did.
So much so i'm going to read it again....
Kie |
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Re: Storyteller
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by ammalu on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 06:21:18 AM AEST
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| well said - good write - keep it up. |
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