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A Cry For Help
Contributed by
parkman
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:31:58 PM in AEST
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Help me please, please help me
Is this freedom, am I free
From this cesspit, earths quagmire
Dragging me under, like a huge funeral pyre
Help me please, please help me
Am I insane, is it insanity
Hearing voices, inside my head
Screaming at me, Id should be dead
Help me please, please help me
Im not blind, but, I cant see
The meaning of my existence, where no one cares
Like Im scum from the deepest core, of earths layers
Help me please, please help me
Take my life, set me free
From the demons, that torment my mind
Help me please, youll be helping mankind
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-05-01 13:31:58]
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Re: A Cry For Help
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 02:48:11 PM AEST
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| wow, this is powerful! Keep up the good work! I hope that you get what you want! |
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Re: A Cry For Help
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by Blu on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:37:05 PM AEST
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sometimes it's difficult to see the lessons in life when we're stuck in the middle of them. Very good write.
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Re: A Cry For Help
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:26:24 PM AEST
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wow......This was filled with so much emotion, very powerful indeed.
Blessings
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Re: A Cry For Help
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by BaByBaNaNa on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:44:02 PM AEST
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| i don't even know what to say . . . wow! i loved your poem! |
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