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Tied To You
Contributed by
Night_Child
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 02:35:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You've taken my mind
My body
I was yours since the day I met you
Like a chilly winter wind
You swept me off my feet
I've been tethered to you
With a steel rope
But steel rusts
After my many tears
The rope is breaking
I'm drifting away
I will stay no longer
I won't cut myself
Because you made me
No longer are you taking
My life away
No kind words
Ever escaped your lips
If any ever did
Then they were lies
You're abuse
Is too much
I'm not your dog
To kick and scream at
Just leave me here
Tied to this tree
Thank you for destroying me
For trying to kill me
With words of hatred
Your face haunting me
While I'm awake
While I dream
This rolling ocean
In my broken heart
Wave after wave
Of torture and pain
I should hold on
Because the sun is setting
Over the ocean
But I'm afraid to say it
I don't want to believe it
I think
You've ruined me for good
Since I can feel the tide
Taking me away
As your steel rope
Drags me to the bottom
Closer to the blackness
That you have placed there
I'm being consumed
As you stand idly
Laughing as I'm drowning
In your deep dark hate
Copyright ©
Night_Child
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2004-05-01 14:35:14]
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Re: Tied To You
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:07:00 PM AEST
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| I hope you get your freedom! But this is really good! Great write! |
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Re: Tied To You
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by BaByBaNaNa on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:40:26 PM AEST
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| oh my gosh! your poem is so sad! at first i didn't understand it all that well, so i re-read it. it's soooo sad! but it was an excellent poem! keep writing! |
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Re: Tied To You
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by whisper-of-night on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:16:53 PM AEST
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| ...........*weep with you*........................ |
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