|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Autumn’s Collapse
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:45:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Autumn carries within it the death of many
The subsiding of fall
Decay of such beauty and color
The absence of green for the winter
As we lie upon the earth
And embrace their collapse
Its like a dream
The endless amount of scattered leaves
They bed two bodies
Two lives that will one day fall like foliage
Each and every slow descent
Could very well represent a different life
The vibrant colors to withered grays
As were all faced with our own autumn one day
Copyright ©
Diatribe
... [
2004-05-01 15:45:39]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Autumn’s Collapse
(User Rating: 1 )
by Blu on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:55:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful! Very good imagery. You have a way with metaphors. Good write!
~Blu |
|
|
Re: Autumn’s Collapse
(User Rating: 1 )
by blackmarker on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 04:15:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow. Amazing, I love it! Very beautiful, great job. |
|
|
Re: Autumn’s Collapse
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:22:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is a wonderful poem. Filled with awesome imagery.
I read it twice and I have to tell you that I though it was excellent.
Kie |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
